I liked the sound of it in the first 10-20 seconds... however, it was way too repetitive, and never "peaked". If you had held the beat for around 30 seconds, then led into another rhythm, this could have easily been 10 stars.
Regardless, good effort. I look forward to your future, and hopefully more improved work.
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